This is a great flowing and a deep verse.

Amazing :0)

Congrats on the win!

Absolutely stunning, as always! I am such a huge fan of your work!! Well done and congrats on your win :)

Judging comment:

This is such a strong piece with such real and unique imagery and descriptions that I couldn't stop even for a little bit to pause while I was reading it. With fields of unshielded apologies, misheard messiahs, wings made from stretched out arms on a person's back and teaching one's own father how to walk - the descriptions are really unique and vivid and bring about a high sense of sadness in its every word. The poet has beautifully blended soft and dark images to form this sad piece of poetry.