Comments : Goldilocks And The 3 Bears (twisted nursery rhyme)

  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Nicely written. I like a good ole gruesome story before bed. :0)

    BTW is this how you intended this line?
    "But it caught caught her with a claw."

    • 5 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Glad you liked dude and thanks for heads up on the type error

      Regards

      Craig

  • 5 years ago

    by Ren

    Oh YES!!! I have a weakness for this sort of writing. Twisted little spins on fairy tales, especially when they get a little dark and gruesome. This is absolutely fantastic, and had me giggling at the end. Awesome awesome awesome!!!

    (<3)^click!!

    • 5 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thank you. I always enjoy doing stuff like this. When I start them I'm never quite sure where they're gonna end they just kinda find their own way.

      Regards

      Craig