Comments : Dreaming soul

  • 5 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    A succinct, but powerful poem. I enjoyed it thoroughly, a couple corrections I'd suggest though:

    (misspelling)
    *unsettling thoughts
    (syllabication)
    *are at the ready

    Wonderful work,
    S

    • 5 years ago

      by Invisibly Awesome

      Thank you for the compliment and also for the helpful tip, both are very much appreciated :)