Comments : Before You Became The Sun

  • 5 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Magical

  • 5 years ago

    by Hellon

    I love this so MUCH! Wish I'd seen it first to have the chance to nominate it but...glad to see it there anyway :)

    Can you just count the number of 'your's you use and maybe try to edit a few...it's still lovely if you don't BTW...

  • 5 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Beautiful!

  • 5 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I'm gushing with love for this poem!

    Nature metaphor at its finest, so cryptic and yet just awesome
    with a visual display of WOW. Truly a delight to read.