Comments : Wandering Poet

  • 5 years ago

    by Michael

    Poemelo,

    such a lovely piece of writing, of a poet roaming to places for inspiration, with each place opening a different chapter. Really enjoyed this.
    I came across a couple of typos maybe? 'coz' maybe to 'as'
    'she's a half naked'
    I found myself in a drool'- maybe-

    'she is half naked
    I find myself drooling' and in some other areas which I will leave to you Only suggestions I offer. But this has the making of a wonderful piece, well done
    Michael :)

    • 5 years ago

      by P o e m e l o

      Hello Michael,

      Thanks for your appreciation and wonderful comment. You know how I love to be corrected by a verygood poet like you. I will do some amendments as I take heed with your lovely suggestions. Thank you very much. Thank you Than you