Pertubation

by Aegis   Aug 20, 2018


Take my pen;
I have no need for empty words.

Take my breath;
I do not find solace in whispered dreams.

Take my soul;
I am but a shell of a man,
void of all sanctity.

Take me-
My dreams are frayed and fading.

I am chaos.

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  • 5 years ago

    by Brenda

    As always, love your writes...

  • 5 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    You've captured really well the feeling of emptiness in a lost soul. I think it will resonate with most people at some point in their lives. Milly x

    • 5 years ago

      by Aegis

      I appreciate your feedback:)

  • 5 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Isn't it so strange that we can feel the presence of emptiness? Or maybe not the presence, but the absence of who we are.

    I felt such a sense of hopelessness in this - that even the promise of dreams are not something that could interest you.

    Powerful poem, as always.

    • 5 years ago

      by Aegis

      This is an old write, one full of pure, raw hopelessness. I'm glad I got the feels out there.

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