Comments : Darkness of Despair

  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Nice to see you writing again. As I was reading the tension was building and I thought "any moment now, he'll snap her neck, or make a sexual move" but no! Is this 'Prince of darkness' a prelude for more? If so I'm intrigued where you will go.

    Nice rhyming and imagery here.

    Take care.

    • 5 years ago

      by dirtylilangels

      Well i hadn't thought of creating more off of this one but maybe i will play around with one and see what i come up with