Personal yet thought-provoking indeed. I, too, am happy to see this nominated. There's a lot of elements to this. Reminiscing and also wondering perhaps about the life this person will have after you. Are our own lives simpy collections of all the best memories or journeys? I sensed a bit of bitterness at the closing line but it made me smile a bit that you took that magnet, maybe for your own reason, and it kind of left me with a feeling that you're unapologetic for taking it.
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