Comments : Battlefield

  • 5 years ago

    by Catchy

    Nice poem inspired by a tragic event. I'd love to make one when I get inspired. Keep up. :)

    • 5 years ago

      by P o e m e l o

      Charmander,

      Thank you. I'll wait til you get inspired :-)

  • 5 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    An inspired piece that raises awareness of tragic events. A captivating and emotional read. Milly x

    • 5 years ago

      by P o e m e l o

      Thank you Milly for your time reading the poem :-) God bless

  • 5 years ago

    by Michael

    Poemelo,

    Congratulations on your win this week
    Michael :)

    • 5 years ago

      by P o e m e l o

      Thank you Michael. My first win :) Didnt expect this

  • 5 years ago

    by Mark

    Congrats on the win!

  • 5 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Judges comments

    Battlefield (by Poemelo ) 10 points

    War is a terrible thing and yet so many amazing works of art are borne from that horror.

    This poem, in my eyes depicts the true cost of war. It is not about the soldier or the general, it's about the effects those people have on innocent lives.

    War exist in many ways. Either nation against nation or within ourselves. There will always be a victor and there will always be a cost.

    This conveys the true cost.

    With regard to its writing and conveyance! The poem is brilliant although I think there is a type error or two which could have been easily addressed.

    Regardless of these minor things it is a very well worked and captivating poem.

    A credit to its author

    • 5 years ago

      by P o e m e l o

      Craig,

      Thank you so much for a wonderful comment. I really appreciate it.