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by P o e m e l o Sep 11, 2018
Nature, environment /
The rustling of leaves
Breaks the silence of midnight.
Calmness comes again
by Ben Pickard
Beautifully written little haiku which calmed me as I read!
All the best
by P o e m e l o
To hear such a comment from you inspire me even more. Thank you Ben :)
A nice Haiku Poemelo.
The sound of leaves rustling and then calm again.
The only comment I would say is maybe change one of the 'silences' for another word of the same meaning, so as words aren't repeated.
But well done
Thank you Michael. I will make some amends as you suggest :-)
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