Comments : Refraction

  • 2 months ago

    by Ya----Na

    And there are rainbows in your words. Loved it Cj. Short poems are stealing my heart. First one by poemelo and now this one from you.

    • 2 months ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thank you I'll take a peek.

      Craig

  • 2 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    A bit twisted Craig but I get it :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 2 months ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Oi,! moi twisted? Never such a thing lol x

  • 2 months ago

    by Brenda

    Craig, digging in deep with this. I liked it a lot . Showed a very vulnerable side...

    • 2 months ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thanks Bren.

      Not so sure about it being vulnerable. Just a thought I had.

      Craig x

  • 2 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is an outright winner in my humble opinion. It is an absolutely brilliant and beautiful piece of poetry and easily my favorite of yours. Magical.

    • 2 months ago

      by CJ Maleney

      I don't know what to say to that Ben other than thank you.

      Dips ones head sir.

      Craig

  • 2 months ago

    by P o e m e l o

    Love this Craig! Added to my favorites :)

  • 2 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Excellent!

    • 2 months ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Cheers dude.

      Not exactly sure where this one came from.

      Craig

  • 2 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Loved it.. beauty in sorrow for there are rainbows in your tears... beautiful. Milly x

  • 1 month ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    To be a short poem, it really packs a punch of not only heartache but hopefulness. The first line with the exclamation mark is almost like a plea for forgiveness, as maybe you've already hurt them as they have you.. which is why for a split moment you want them to hurt as you have. But in their tears, you can see hope for a better future, after a storm there is always a rainbow.

    I love your title. Fits perfectly!

  • 2 days ago

    by Tanya Southey

    So well crafted. A few sentences, yet there could be a novel behind it.

    • 2 days ago

      by CJ Maleney

      And there is.

      I looked at your profile which is not something I do often.

      It's interesting to say the least.

      Regards

      Craig