Ooh is all I'll say for now as I'm sleepy, I'll edit later.

Regards

Craig

This was good! Good job! ????

Sounds like a person who has lived a life few of us could imagine. Now numbing her pain she's one of life's outsiders. It's a good thing there are people like you, Michael.

What a brilliant lady and what a beautifully rhymed story you've given us Michael. I can picture her on her bench! Fabulous! :-) x
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I guess shes a lady who happens to chit chat with Michael while both sitting on the bench and share her side, such this stunning message :)

Perfect Michael that is all.

Thanks everyone for your lovely comments. This lady is exceptional, a friend and very wise and intelligent, and she can rap haha!
Michael :)

Wow, I love this Michael. She seems to be a free spirited woman...but the long stanza was a rap part right...hehe. Almost can imagine Eminem. :-)

Michael, fellow poets left such wonderful comments. Completely agree with Mel that part of the poem looks like a rap.
I always love your poems, you capture the exact emotions according to the theme that's the reason your poems touch our hearts.
One of the most beautiful poem is hiding in Rania's contest thread. I hope you will post it soon. Thanks for sharing

Love the Rhyming and great imagery as always. Captivating as always. Milly x

Michael, you certainly have a way with words and a story. Well done with this-