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by P o e m e l o
So so so lovely :) Love this
Appreciate your comments, thanks Poemelo :)
Thanks again Mel
by Milly Hayward
This made me smile as soon as I started reading it. Love the rhyming and the romantic imagery. That first moment when you see someone who you know you are going to fall in love with is priceless. Loved this piece. Milly x
Thanks so much Milly. Your lovely comments made me smile too x
This is great Walter, love how compact it is, which helps with the flow.
You could compact it slightly more, just to remove those little stumbling words that alter the flow.
final line, could read 'You're perfect'
Line one, could read simply 'cannot believe'
Line 3 , discard the word 'both' you have already suggested the poem involves you both.Just a couple of suggestions, do with them what you may, it's your poem after all.
thanks for sharing
by Lyical Madness
Really beautiful :)
Thank you LM :)