Comments : A Bundle Of Joy

  • 5 years ago

    by Bleu

    I love you beyond words and I can not believe that you wrote this. Sorry for crying, Let's just blame the hormones. lmao. I love you!!!

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a lovely poem this is. A warm welcome to the site.

    Take care and all the best,
    Ben

  • 5 years ago

    by Captain Lonesome

    Nicely done! You have captured that wondrous experience in words with great vividness known mostly by those who have experienced it themselves, though in a way that those who have not may see a little clarity!!! Well done!!