My first haiku

by Lilychu   Sep 27, 2018


I love typing haikus
I've never typed one before
I think it's good?

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  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Writing a haiku
    Should capture moments like a
    Camera's shutter
    ^
    This is mine inspired by yours. Like Craig, yours is much better than my very first attempt. My advice research the form and have some fun experimenting.

    • 5 years ago

      by Lilychu

      Thank you so much for the reply and advice

  • 5 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Well done Dani.

    You did better than me.

    Xxx

    • 5 years ago

      by Lilychu

      No worries old man

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