by Ben Pickard Oct 1, 2018
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I've skated on my frozen blood |
Do you know what you do with your words Ben? Do you? |
by Ben Pickard
Thank you, Kitty |
I feel like I want to delve into a thousand different thoughts I have reading this, but this is too heart-wrenching. Mentioning the instruments made me think of times when my spirit was so low, I didn't even want to play the piano or sing, because it's like that part of you that is empty. Those two lines about the organ and guitar made me feel like this goes even deeper, that your spirit is broken and these little things that would bring you joy, give you purpose, they're not present. Literal pieces of you can't properly function anymore. |
by Ben Pickard
Spot on, MA. Thank you for this comment |
by CRAFTY KEN
Hey Ben, I agree with Milly, great use of the metaphors, another tear jerker! |
by Ben Pickard
Thanks, Ken. I hope you're well. |
by - Mr. Darcy
Ben, this is truly an inspired write and one that I feel should be showcased next week. |
by Ben Pickard
Thank you, Michael |
Ben to me a very sad piece yet beautiful written. Somewhat on the dark side. Glad to see it nominated. All the very best |
by Ben Pickard
Thank you, Dagmar |