Comments : Death (Acrostic & Palindrome)

  • 2 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Brilliantly done.

    Take care, Meena

  • 2 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Excellent. You absolutely nailed the two forms in one. The Palindrome is difficult enough without it being an acrostic. Glad to see it nominated and it goes straight to my favourites list. Best wishes Milly x

  • 2 months ago

    by Brenda

    Meena, amazing write! You took two and blended them seamlessly. Well done-

  • 2 months ago

    by Michael

    Two great styles coming together, nicely done Meena

    Michael :)x

  • 2 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    wow wee :O)

  • 1 month ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    To me, forming two forms is difficult in itself but you've done it flawlessly. Awesome job. Congrats on the win!

  • 1 month ago

    by Hope

    Great poem....wonderful!

    • 1 month ago

      by Hope

      Please forgive me....if I take this.

  • 1 month ago

    by yogi73

    This is so creative. I really like your word choice and phrasing. It really has a dark and deathly touch

  • 1 month ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Death (Acrostic & Palindrome) by meena Krish points 4 - this piece really enthralled me because of the short lines maybe it's something to do with the palindrome within the acrostic or it's just because the whole piece was about death which here seemed so suddenly but I felt myself catching my breath a few times, which was far from a bad thing

  • 1 month ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Judges comments

    Death (Acrostic & Palindrome)

    (by Meena Krish) 10 points

    This poem is something of a master class in writing. To write a palindrome is no easy task but do so in an acrostic format also is pure genius. I can only imagine how much effort must have gone into its creation.

    The format of the poem detracts nothing from its subject matter and content which is a very fitting description of a rather difficult and sombre moment.

    Fantastic work