on your bike (syntuit)

by - Mr. Darcy   Oct 13, 2018


wibble wobble-ling
through life is fun when you ride

a unicycle

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- Mr. Darcy
© 2018

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  • 7 months ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Very funny especially as I've just been wibbling and wobbling on mine of my way home from work because people wouldn't get outta my way hahaha

  • 7 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Loved this quirky syntuit. I think wibble and wobbling are such deliciously funny words. Particularly wibble. Especially if you add a Rowen Atkinson voice over. Milly x

    • 7 months ago

      by - Mr. Darcy

      You are so right. I love Captain slack bladder! Lol

  • 7 months ago

    by Jamie

    Another poem I really enjoyed from you because of the funny truth to it. When we really think of the bare basics of it, we really do wobble through life, I think you could really say life is a balancing act which I truly think this about. You have to know when to be serious but you also have to know when to have fun and let that inner child out which is what I see in this poem. You directed the reader to the fun side of life. And I really liked unicycle because when I personally think of unicycles I think of clowns and although some people are afraid of clowns a lot of kids see them as fun, so I liked that hidden meaning behind this. Well done.

  • 7 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A clever and - dare I say it - altogether sneaky amendment :)

  • 7 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is great Michael and does indeed sound fun. The alliteration in that first line is just so darn...wobbly!
    *By the way, 'wobbling' has two syllables I think, making that line four in total.

    Take care, good man

    • 7 months ago

      by - Mr. Darcy

      Wobbling like life, Ben.
      Thanks, as ever.

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