A clever and - dare I say it - altogether sneaky amendment :)
7 months ago
Another poem I really enjoyed from you because of the funny truth to it. When we really think of the bare basics of it, we really do wobble through life, I think you could really say life is a balancing act which I truly think this about. You have to know when to be serious but you also have to know when to have fun and let that inner child out which is what I see in this poem. You directed the reader to the fun side of life. And I really liked unicycle because when I personally think of unicycles I think of clowns and although some people are afraid of clowns a lot of kids see them as fun, so I liked that hidden meaning behind this. Well done.