Comments : Happy Arrival Date To you

  • 7 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A lovely poem to open your account with, Sylvia. A warm welcome to the site.

    All the very best,
    Ben

  • 7 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Sylvia this piece for me is thought provoking because at first glance it looks as if the character is celebrating the birth of another but woven between the lines is an underlying anamosity as if this birth has impacted the characters life possibly an only child coming to terms with parents making everything about the baby.

    A strong piece for your first submission. Take care and welcome to the site. Best wishes Milly x