Comments : Set free

  • 7 months ago

    by Jamie

    I enjoyed this em. The title is amazing because I truly feel that if you are set free from most things that you get a chance to start over. And that is what I believe the poem is about. You were chained to someone that you loved and you thought loved you. But in any bad relationship it turned sour and abuse started to happen. But possibly years later you found someone who truly loves you for you and the past hurts are starting to fade like scars. The scars you have felt in the past are starting to fade because love can do that to a soul. You are trying to be set free from the pain you felt. And be the person you once were before being chained.

    Well done

  • 7 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Sometimes you have to meet q devil in order to recognise an angel. A thought provoking piece. Milly x

  • 7 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    The more in love you become, the deeper your poetry grows. It's good to know you have finally found a man to redeem your faith in us.
    Nominated x

  • 7 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Fast-paced with some excellent rhyming which is disjointed but works really well - not by accident either, I feel.
    Em, you sound happy which is wonderful to read.

    All the best as ever,
    Ben

  • 7 months ago

    by Michael

    This is a great piece from you Em, the raw edge you deliver just twists around my tongue.

    A sad piece, that reads so well
    Much love
    M:) x

  • 6 months ago

    by BOB GALLO

    Your words are very honest and as Michael said: read well, You write about the simple thing in life without any pretentious sophistication