Scott,
This is a brilliant piece from you fella. love the lay out and the story :)

M

Thank u my style is different than most but that's what makes this site amazing. Great poems from great minds glad u can relate to it man and thanks for ur vote.

Loved the rhyming and that your poetry inevitably takes me on an imaginative journey with an entirely unique view. Milly x

As someone with COPD, I can relate to your message.
Every exacerbation feels like this could be the end.
"A sacred little breath away from abort"
I love this and it helps me accept the truth of my life.