Comments : Redemption

  • 5 years ago

    by Jamie

    Nominated. What a great poem milly

    • 5 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you Jamie so much for your lovely comment and the nomination. Milly x

  • 5 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Oh Milly ... This makes me think about being anxious because of the fast paced lines, it made my heart race.
    Much love x

    • 5 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thanks Em, It is representing how quickly things spiral out of control in our lives sometimes and spiral back again. Milly x

  • 5 years ago

    by Michael

    Phew! Miss Milly felt like I was sliding down a helter-skelter reading this nice little piece :)
    Well done, and redemption reached at the end

    Much love
    Michael :)x

    • 5 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thanks Michael. I wanted to portray the speed that can race someone into a place without hope. Yet even when it seems that it is the end. When it looks like there is no turning back. That something can still happen that can propel you just as quickly back into the light. Milly x

  • 5 years ago

    by Sunshine

    What a great piece. I was mesmerised by the pace, it made me feel breathless, all went well with the mood of the poem.

    A perfect representation of the black-white emotional state. When at the end of the tunnel the dim light saves you.

    I really enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you for sharing.

    • 5 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you Rania, I'm so glad that you enjoyed it :) Milly x

  • 5 years ago

    by Brenda

    Wow Milly, the pace of this was dizzying. Well done, I felt the speed with every line.

    • 5 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thanks Brenda, glad you liked it. :) Milly x

  • 5 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Judging comment: Redemption by Milly Hayward points 4 - I liked this piece for its fast pace as it reminded me of when my anxiety hit which is usually when I'm not feeling my best therefore have my barriers down somewhat but this piece brought hope that after ‘every storm there's a rainbow’ or at least that's what we tell ourselves to get through those bad patches.