Comments : Etched Words In Ink (another messed up sonnet type thing)

  • 1 month ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Names of lovers can come and go, but like Indian ink, their memories are indelible.

    Take care.

    • 1 month ago

      by CJ Maleney

      It's more for loved ones rather than lovers but the sentiment remains the same.

      Cheers dude

      Craig

  • 1 month ago

    by Rania Moallem

    How emotional and sweet. Indeed those we dearly love remain engraved in our mind and heart till eternity. Even death can't take them away. A very sincere write. Some lines were so neat; but this was my favorite:

    When body fails and mind turned to sludge,

    ^it was not cliche and you were creative in delivering your message in a new way.

    • 1 month ago

      by CJ Maleney

      My body will fail at some point. I do however hope my mind doesn't turn to sludge. Unfortunately I've seen it happen to so many in later years.

      Regards

      Craig

  • 1 month ago

    by Brenda

    Love this Craig...permanently marking these names, shows on your arm, forever in your heart.

    • 1 month ago

      by CJ Maleney

      It's a work in progress Bren.

      I only came up with the idea recently. I have a phrase tattooed and came up with the idea of having names running through it. Not all have passed as my kids names will run through it too. When it's a little more complete it should look a little like a crossword lattice. X

  • 1 month ago

    by Jamie

    Congrats on the win

    • 1 month ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thank you.

      Hope all is well with you

      Regards

      Craig

  • 1 month ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Congratulations on a fantastic front page Craig - I did read this throughout the week but was so *ahem* tied up I didn't have time to comment.
    Take care x

    • 1 month ago

      by CJ Maleney

      I'm sure I don't know what you mean lol.

      Thanks em x

  • 4 weeks ago

    by Paul Hirst

    Tattoos on our Souls
    Love it