by D.
I really don’t like rhyming couplets, it’s just a preference, but you have clearly practised to hone your craft. This did not feel forced. There is only one couplet I found disquieting: |
by CJ Maleney
Thank you for your words. You are correct vein is an error which I'll amend shortly in fact I thought I already had. |
I like this piece of history.... |