Comments : Salt

  • 1 month ago

    by BOB GALLO

    I think I would grasp the feeling and the logic behind the structure of these fine words, if I was not so confused by the title. I can not stretch my mind around the word salt in relate to this poem.

    • 1 month ago

      by The Prince

      Haha, it’s a bit vague isn’t it! I was referring to the ocean image throughout, and the bitterness of it. I suck at titling poems so I over complicate them quite often!

    • 1 month ago

      by BOB GALLO

      You are such good sport Danny

  • 1 month ago

    by Ya----Na

    Loved it!

  • 1 month ago

    by Brenda

    Danny, loved this, loved how the visuals wended its way throughout.

  • 1 month ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Glad to see this is nominated!

  • 1 month ago

    by Michael

    Very well written piece, with so much imagery.
    M :)

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Jamie

    Congrats on the win

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Hope

    great poem!

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    I like this...well penned