Comments : A winters romance

  • 4 months ago

    by Ya----Na

    Beautiful!
    I love winter and your poems too.
    Michael, Loved it.

    • 4 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you my friend :)

  • 4 months ago

    by Daniel

    You have quite a masterful control of language! This is no exception. You control your sentences with really well chosen verbs, and assonance.

  • 4 months ago

    by Renegade Angel

    The imagery is colorful and mesmerizing! Enchanting.

    • 4 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you for reading :)

  • 4 months ago

    by Mark

    Enchanting is the word! Great win Michael

    • 4 months ago

      by Michael

      Thanks Mark :)

  • 4 months ago

    by Sajal Ahmed

    Just awesome piece!

    • 4 months ago

      by Michael

      Thanks for reading Sajal :)

  • 3 months ago

    by Darren

    judges comment
    Micheal always has a way of drawing you in when he tells his tales in poetry form.
    I loved the first full stanza, the images conjured of her dancing through autumn, converting it into winter. There is a feeling of cold throughout the remainder of the poem through clever word choice.
    We are taken on the journey with him, I felt I was gazing out of the same window. 10 points