Comments : Between our Lips

  • 5 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Beautiful Bob!
    Loved it!

    • 5 years ago

      by ddavidd

      I appreciate that. Thanks dear Ya----Na

  • 5 years ago

    by D.

    Were you inspired by Neruda for this? :)

    • 5 years ago

      by ddavidd

      I am always inspired by him. But I do not remember if I were affected subconsciously by him in this particular, directly. I would welcome the feedback.

  • 5 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I like the descriptions and the sentiments
    which are tied together in this poem...lovely
    read!

    • 5 years ago

      by ddavidd

      Thank you dearest Meena.