Comments : My Chemistry teacher

  • 5 years ago

    by ddavidd

    Such intimate moments in this piece:
    I was touched-
    by your kiss
    that melted thoughts,
    beneath my breath

    • 5 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Bob :)

  • 5 years ago

    by D.

    Such a delicate touch in this poem, and the intimacy is striking. I really felt the persona’s adoration for this teacher. I still think your titling is a little too telling but maybe that’s your intention. Beautiful, dude.

    • 5 years ago

      by Michael

      Thanks fella, nice words and titles just come without thought some times, but I like your way of thinking :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Michael this is adorable. Hugs to you

    • 5 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Dagmar :)x

  • 5 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Beautiful piece about an emotional lesson. Milly x

    • 5 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Milly :)x