Comments : The Violin of the River

  • 5 years ago

    by naaz

    You don't have to mention because I always hear music in your poems, and I wish they just keep on flowing like a river as far as possible or maybe for eternity.

    All the best!

  • 5 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Simply beautiful and vividly entertaining! I like the choice of
    words and the smoothness of this piece and the warm tone of romance...
    loved the read!

    • 5 years ago

      by ddavidd

      Thank you dear Meena

  • This touched me in such a deep and magical place.
    I've been suffering of late, of nostalgia but your words awoke me. Thank you

    • 5 years ago

      by ddavidd

      Thank you dear Hazel. Nice to have you back.

  • 5 years ago

    by Hellon

    It's a great shame that this poem seems to have fallen into the great abyss of poetry that's posted in the 'blackout period' of the P&Q weekend and no longer has a nomination choice available...

    • 5 years ago

      by ddavidd

      Thank you Hellon. If I remember right it was nominated last week by Naaz

  • 5 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    My favourite part of this piece is very much the final stanza. The imagery and metaphors are beautiful and so strong. It is a touching tribute to a beautiful being. Milly x

    • 5 years ago

      by ddavidd

      Thanks Milly for your time and compliment