Comments : When a Snowflake Melts

  • 5 years ago

    by D.

    A sweet poem! :) I enjoyed the vivid imagery here, and whilst I wasn’t a fan of the ‘secret messages dangling upon tongues’ (I don’t think dangling gives the image of snowflakes?) I like the innocence you portray here, and I would’ve liked to have seen even more of this lovely vocabulary!

    • 5 years ago

      by Maple Tree

      awwwww thank you Daniel :-)

      when I was a kid I used to stick my tongue out to catch snowflakes.... a sweet memory of mine which I tied into this piece

  • 5 years ago

    by Star

    The title “When a Snow Flake Melts” to me is like showing inner-self, which is connected to the end of the poem “awakening the inner child”. It is like revealing what’s hidden within the snow flake.

    Just beautiful!!

  • 5 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Absolutely beautiful

  • 5 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Beautiful, vivid imagery.. perfection... Milly x

  • 5 years ago

    by Brenda

    Andrea, your pieces are so beautiful. I too used to catch snowflakes on my tongue as a child. It brought me back to those days. You carry so much inside you, I know it weighs heavy on your heart. Like that falling snow, let it fall, ease your burden...Hugs you-

  • 5 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Lovely like yourself, dear friend! <3

  • 5 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Beautiful imaginary, Andrea.
    Loved it.
    I enjoyed reading it with my inner child.

  • 5 years ago

    by Darren

    An imagery explosion, loved this Andrea