Comments : Andrea, My Darling

  • 2 months ago

    by Maple Tree

    WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT

    HUG ME <3

    Damn it man this is brilliant, beautiful and outstanding-
    Ben, you are my magical man, I love this and you!!

    this made my day and I giggled!

    • 2 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      You're welcome, Andrea. I have to say, this did make me smile as I wrote it, which isn't always easy...

  • 2 months ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Fan bloody tastic!!!

  • 2 months ago

    by Brenda

    OMG! Wow....didn't know things were so serious between you two...what the hell Ben? I thought you and me....well, us two....hmph! Spare me your English charm.....;)
    In all seriousness. This is wonderful! Knocked it out of the park!

    • 2 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Brenda, it takes more than one woman to form a harem. Of course, there is room for you too :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Michael

    A very romantic tale of a fellow poet Ben! albeit in jest ;)

    • 2 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Jest? Who said anything about jest? :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Ya----Na

    Masterpiece! Beautiful!
    Loved it!

  • 2 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    I see it now, I should have known
    your heart has only gone and roamed
    across the sea, away from me
    to a woman, a Maple Tree

    I thought our love meant more than this
    to publicly renounce our gift
    our gift of love between two guys
    a gift, this tree cannot supply

    Do not forget the nights of heat
    the nights you moaned at my teat
    are not my breasts as wonderful
    their shape size and pert muscle

    No, don't answer, I know it now
    she, the tree, has made you growl
    but you, my son, were my dog first
    I have your leash, so do your worst...

    • 2 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Now this is the kind of humour I miss when you are away, Michael. I would praise this comment, but I'm not sure whether the mods would pass it...

  • 2 months ago

    by Finding myself

    I really like the flow of this poem. You really painted a beautiful picture with this one

  • 2 months ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Hey Ben, a harem is nice, my wife could use the help!
    Sorry to burst your balloon, but with the heart, only one woman can fill the room, ask Solomon.

    • 2 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thanks, Ken. And you are right:there's only room for one.
      Take care

  • 2 months ago

    by DarkNDangerous

    This is beautiful and eloquently written. After reading the comments as well, you and Mr. Darcy need to write the next Shakespeare novel haha. Definitely made my day.

    • 2 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Maybe we will... :))

      Many thanks

  • 2 months ago

    by Tanya Southey

    Love this!

  • 1 month ago

    by Ya----Na

    Congrats Ben on this one too.