Comments : La La Land

  • 2 months ago

    by S.T.A.R.

    The title grabbed, and then I sooo LOVE this!!! It really took me back in time when I was really young, I just want to read this everyday :)

    • 2 months ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you so much for your lovely comment. I'm really glad you liked it. All my best wishes Milly x

  • 2 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Great, frantic rhyming, Milly. The layout of the piece really adds to the pace.

    All the very best as ever

    • 2 months ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you Ben really appreciate your comments. Take care x

  • 2 months ago

    by Ya----Na

    Soothing voice
    and gentle hand
    take me back
    to La la land
    cast away
    those half world scenes
    so I can find
    much nicer dreams.

    Missing my mum too. Touched!

    • 2 months ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Ya-Na thank you for comment and like x

  • 2 months ago

    by Brenda

    Well done with this Milly! Brought me back to those days, heck sometimes now I wonder what ghosties roam about.

    • 2 months ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thankyou Brenda. I sometimes wonder too, especially at my Mums house, its very creaky....

  • 2 months ago

    by Walter

    Love this piece Milly which would make a fantastic bed time story for children! Does take me back...well done.

    • 2 months ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you Walter, really glad you liked it x

  • 2 months ago

    by Daniel

    This is lullaby-like, and a really sweet poem. Evokes a lot of nostalgia. Everyone remembers calling for their parents to rescue them from the boogeyman.

    Did you mean to say ‘ghost aboard’ by the way?

  • 2 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Thank you Daniel for your lovely comments very much appreciated but slightly confusing.. Im sorry but it doesnt say "ghost aboard" it says "ghost abroad" which has a totally different meaning :) best wishes Milly x

  • 2 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Good afternoon, Milly.

    There is something 'half world(ly)' about nighttime. Those who suffer with insomnia know this all too well. It is like everyone is sleeping peacefully, leaving you awake dealing with a warped reality - every inanimate object somehow lives, or at least knows your thought. I liked your rhyming stanzas. Your choice of words made the, otherwise unnerving scene, playful and fun.

    Nice work. x

    • 2 months ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you Mr Darcy :) I go through stages of insomnia some times worse than others. Thank you for your lovely comments really very appreciated. Milly x

  • 2 months ago

    by Michael

    Miss Milly,

    You do pour out some unique ink from your quill :) A well rymed piece about all those night time antics that play us up.
    Wonderful lady, much love M:)x

    • 2 months ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you Michael :) really appreciate your lovely comments. Much love Milly x

  • 2 months ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Oh the joys of being an insomniac with an overactive mind... It's certainly no fun in the morning xx

  • 1 month ago

    by Guilty By Design

    I love this. Kinda flows like a lullaby and it’s grand. I relate to this a little too much. I have a lot of trouble falling asleep but not quite as much when I go visit my mother. There’s nothing like the comfort of home.