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by Ben Pickard
Wonderfully written Glad to see it nominated.
This is truly beautiful.
by Milly Hayward
A beautiful piece. The song of tears, what a lovely concept. Milly x
Some really pretty imagery here! I think it suffers in the second and third stanzas with the use of ‘whatever’ and ‘close my eyes tightly as hands’ sounds a little awkward. I can’t imagine it.
The final stanza is lovely, and demonstrates some nice verb use. :)