Little Finches

by ddavidd   Jan 12, 2019


liberty is not a hymn or an anthem,
a slogan
blocked in the thorax of intersections
of our convictions,
a march
on the squares of the big cities’ apples
with apple worms
wiggling and gobbling inside,
rutting the flesh of their hosts
to metamorphose to their petty sour wings,
a hero that could defeat an army,
an army of braves
leaping over the trenches of fearsome bayonets.

liberty is the tiny throat
of little finches
only
when
they
sing
together.

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  • 5 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    What is so enthralling about this piece is that initially, I would think of liberty as a shout, a revolutionary cry, a hymn or bellow. But it starts with something smaller, and I love how you incorporated that sweet triumph. That almost humility of liberty beginning in the tiny ones, the ones perhaps others perceive as "weak", not like an army we were expecting.

    • 5 years ago

      by ddavidd

      Thanks dear POP fo your time and comprehension.

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I agree. That last stanza is wonderful.

    • 5 years ago

      by ddavidd

      Thanks Ben, I appreciate.