Comments : Little Finches

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I agree. That last stanza is wonderful.

    • 5 years ago

      by ddavidd

      Thanks Ben, I appreciate.

  • 5 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    What is so enthralling about this piece is that initially, I would think of liberty as a shout, a revolutionary cry, a hymn or bellow. But it starts with something smaller, and I love how you incorporated that sweet triumph. That almost humility of liberty beginning in the tiny ones, the ones perhaps others perceive as "weak", not like an army we were expecting.

    • 5 years ago

      by ddavidd

      Thanks dear POP fo your time and comprehension.