Did you change the original version...like in the last 10 minutes? I swear it's different now?

I really liked this one when I first read it and then you changed a few words and, in my opinion, changed the whole meaning of the poem...maybe you intended it that way, I'm not really sure but I do like how it has turned out.

I'm sure people will read different things here (that's the beauty of poetry) ..I will go one step further and say that you can look at a blank canvas and see colour if you can hear the music :)

Also...thumbs up for spelling colour as it was meant to be haha!!!