It seems that you sliced a moment diagonally only to see it more clear or for the sake of figurative dissection of the sadness and beauty of that moment, or better to magnify the feeling of that moment.

Single moment in a poem. Lovely.

Sometimes it happens that through the chaos of rampaging time the most beautiful moments can make time stop. Its those tiny moments that can help bring respite if only for a few minutes. A beautiful piece.... sending you warm hugs and much love Milly x

I love how the tone reads both ominous yet anxious for the change in weather and the change that will affect us all in some way.

The brevity works so well to create those visuals and moments that predict what will come and how we prepare for nature!