Comments : A Dragon's Love (English sonnet)

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Michael

    Ben, a great sonnet about the weariness of love, and all the pain that can come, if it turns out to be false in some respect.

    just to say the fourth line, i couldnt quite get into meter. However we all read rhyme differently, so it just could be me,

    Great job fella, M :)

    • 2 weeks ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Yes, I struggled in a few places with this one, Michael. I think the meter is there throughout but only just in places if that makes any sense. I think it's the word 'unto' but I hear the stress on 'Un'. But as you say, we all hear it differently. Thanks for the honest feedback and the comment in general.

      All the best as ever

  • 2 weeks ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Ben, very metaphorical, and mystical in design, I think this work can have many interpretations.

    Nice work, added to my Favorites.

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Congratulations Ben

  • 2 weeks ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    I'm so very glad this won. It's a brilliant Sonnet.

    • 2 weeks ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thank you, Michael, that's very kind of you.

  • 1 week ago

    by Meena Krish

    It took me to those days of medieval times and all the ingredients
    for the mind to explore...well done and Congrats on the win!!

  • 1 week ago

    by Guilty By Design

    I love sonnets, they’re one of my favorite types of poetry. Great piece!