Closer to spring (syntuit)

by Michael   Feb 6, 2019


Clouds rise like eyelids
unveiling a bright blue sky
daffodils springing

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  • 2 months ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Like it Michael, it tells much with few lines, reminds me of the Haiku style.
    added to my Favorites.

  • 2 months ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Lovely, simple and pure!

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you MA :)x

  • 2 months ago

    by Brenda

    So pretty Michael. Something to look forward to...Michigan is not close to spring.

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Brenda :)x

  • 2 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    I really like the words you've used. They really do help me see the coming of Spring.
    My only critique of this would be:

    I am fairly sure Haiku's don't have similes or metaphors. Using Larry's cousin form, a 'syntuit' would allow this.
    Anyway, in my cloudy eyes, it's a good visual piece.

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Thanks Mr D, i will change it :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Maple Tree

    Beautiful!!!

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Andrea :)x

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