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by Michael Feb 6, 2019
Nature, environment /
Clouds rise like eyelids
unveiling a bright blue sky
by CRAFTY KEN
Like it Michael, it tells much with few lines, reminds me of the Haiku style.
added to my Favorites.
by Poet on the Piano
Lovely, simple and pure!
Thank you MA :)x
So pretty Michael. Something to look forward to...Michigan is not close to spring.
Thank you Miss Brenda :)x
by - Mr. Darcy
I really like the words you've used. They really do help me see the coming of Spring.
My only critique of this would be:
I am fairly sure Haiku's don't have similes or metaphors. Using Larry's cousin form, a 'syntuit' would allow this.
Anyway, in my cloudy eyes, it's a good visual piece.
Thanks Mr D, i will change it :)
by Maple Tree
Thank you Andrea :)x
by Ben Pickard
by Em (marmite)