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by Maple Tree
Thank you Andrea :)x
by - Mr. Darcy
I really like the words you've used. They really do help me see the coming of Spring.
My only critique of this would be:
I am fairly sure Haiku's don't have similes or metaphors. Using Larry's cousin form, a 'syntuit' would allow this.
Anyway, in my cloudy eyes, it's a good visual piece.
Thanks Mr D, i will change it :)
So pretty Michael. Something to look forward to...Michigan is not close to spring.
Thank you Miss Brenda :)x
by Poet on the Piano
Lovely, simple and pure!
Thank you MA :)x
by CRAFTY KEN
Like it Michael, it tells much with few lines, reminds me of the Haiku style.
added to my Favorites.