Comments : Obscured (haiku)

  • 5 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Very thought provoking Larry..

  • 5 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Loved this one, Larry. The past few days there has been intense fog while driving and it made me think of entering one reality and coming out with a new or warped perspective.

    The way you incorporated a mountain, and the way we can obscure or perhaps numb ourselves so we don't deal with the climb or heaviness of that ascent (or descent).

    Thought-provoking, indeed.