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by - Mr. Darcy
A lovely, yet stark write here, Milly. Love's journey can be harsh and strip off 'loves golden luster' and leave a nasty taste in one's mouth. Xx
by Milly Hayward
Thank you Mr Darcy, its not my normal style (I prefer to write more humorous prose) but sometimes much darker pieces find their way out. :) xx
by Dagmar Wilson
Love is so strong it hurts and it can go from sweet to bitter. Hugs to you Milly and thank you for sharing
Thank you Dagmar :) xx
You speak of the difficulties and tribulations of love in a melancholic and evocative way. The form and rhythm are consistent, and the imagery in the second and fourth are particularly lovely. Well penned :)
Thank you Daniel. Really glad you liked it. Its not my normal style so much harder to do. Milly x
by Kitty Cat Lady
A fabulous and insightful piece that flows beautifully. I love your language here Milly and I'm glad to see it nominated :-) x
Thank you Kitty :) xx
by Ben Pickard
Very well written with a neat abab rhyme scheme which isn't all that easy to do.
Take care, Milly.
Thanks Ben :) xx
Haven't read such a beautiful poem in a long time. Truly deserves front page win this week.
Thankyou Ya-Na for your lovely comment really glad you liked it. Best wishes Milly x
by CRAFTY KEN
Great write Milly, love may be lost for a period of time, but, true love never fails, it cannot, for, it is from the Divine.
Thank you Ken for your lovely comments :) xx
Thanks Dagma x
Congrats on your win Milly, I loved it!
Congratulations on your win. X
by Acoustic Odyssey
Definitely put a dent in my armour, we'll penned.
Thankyou for all the congratulations and lovely comments. It was a lovely surprise to win xx
by Em (marmite)
This is absolutely beautiful and so true Milly. Apologies I missed it but a well deserved win xx
Thanks Em, really glad you liked it. It was a lovely surprise to win it rarely happens :) xx
by Meena Krish
Nicely penned and true..congrats on
by Muhammad Amiruddeen
This is a wonderful piece.
Thank you Muhammad. Glad you liked it. Milly x
by Jyoti Rawat
this is nice poem
Thank you Jyoti:)
by Zia Mikaela
I love this!