Comments : Skin made of peel

  • 3 months ago

    by Maple Tree

    You simply blew me away with this ..... Your ending was brilliant... Oh how I love this poem!!

    • 3 months ago

      by Eve

      Thank you so much!

  • 3 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Like a Harribo strawberry heart it will squash if you squeeze it. Allowing someone in past the 'zipper' to start Squeezing is a risk. Will they kiss or bite?

    • 3 months ago

      by Eve

      If you're still naive,their bite will feel like love

  • 3 months ago

    by Walter

    Wow just wow! This is amazing and glad to see it nominated.

    • 3 months ago

      by Eve

      Thank you so much!.

  • 3 months ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Lovely Eve, btw, did we ever meet in a Garden? Seriously, I love the lines Like; 2 red roses in my office
    And their thorns inside of me, That i have a skin made of peel
    And a heart made of jelly. The humor is well placed, like the skin of an alligator compared to a pig's belly.
    Added to my Favorites.

    • 3 months ago

      by Eve

      Your comment gives me life,thank you.!