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by Milly Hayward
A stunning piece that takes us from the snowy Winter to balmy Summer very well timed. Milly x
by Ben Pickard
Thank you, Milly
by Dagmar Wilson
Excellent write Ben. All the very best
Thank you, Dagmar
When snow melts, it is like unwrapping a beautiful gift. Love this!!!
Thanks for reading, S
Oh Ben, this is just lovely! The visuals you bring to a poem are stunning. Well done sir!
Thanks, Brenda. I tried a different rhyme scheme and syllable count with this one and I wasn't sure if it worked.
I say it a lot, but I’m really not a fan of rhyming couplets, but your control and choice in your vocabulary is really masterful. Polished and free flowing in beauty as always.
Thanks, Daniel. I actually agree with you and I don't often write in couplets as it isn't easy to do without sounding forced so I always approach with caution! Take care.
by - Mr. Darcy
Somehow rhyming couplets suit certain pieces. Your poem is more than a pleasure; it a testament to your skill. I really do like your a,a,b,a - c,c,d,c - e,e,f,e - g,g,h,g and a,a,i, a
Well done, Ben
Well done for working it out Michael - I'm still struggling!
by Em (marmite)
Ben as ever this is superb..
Thanks so much, Em. Take care
Lovely fella :)
Thanks, Michael. I am always happiest at this time of year, when summer is tantalisingly close!
by CJ Maleney
I simply love this Ben I wish I could share in your optimism though.
The snow drops still bloom in my garden and I keep thinking back to last year, when all was fine until the beast landed. (Think it was early March).
Then again I do live up north so we are normally a season behind you southerners anyway lol
Hoping your poem brings as much sunshine in the real world as it does here
Oh and in favourites. Really wanna share this with my Dani
Thanks, Craig. Actually, I agree -it's probably too early for optimism but optimism is all I have, lol
by Jyoti Rawat
close to heart.
Thanks again, Jyoti
Double win! Beautiful
Glad to see this here fella, well done :)
A pleasure to be here with you, Michael.
by Acoustic Odyssey
Absolutely gorgeous piece!
Thank you - glad you enjoyed