Comments : Life

  • 5 years ago

    by ddavidd

    Wow It is so beautiful. I would change some detail to turn this juwel to my liking, if I was the writer.
    Very Inventive. remind me of Omar khayyam :

    This jug was love-sick like me,
    Tangled in a fair girl's locks;
    This handle you now see on the neck.
    Was his hand on the neck of the girl

    • 5 years ago

      by Muhammad Amiruddeen

      You are welcome to add colour to my amateurish work. I'll be glad if you can any suggestion to make it better.