Reality Rains

by Star   Feb 26, 2019


Dreams burning
underneath a chimney
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Tears evaporating
into a dark sky
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Youth condensing
within a gray cloud
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  • 5 years ago

    by D.

    Three delicate musings that can belong together and apart. There’s a poignancy here that I really enjoy. I’m a huge fan of small pieces of poetry - it’s clear you have a talent for it. :)

    • 5 years ago

      by Star

      Thank you Daniel :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A short piece but powerful and open to interpretation. Milly x

    • 5 years ago

      by Star

      Thank you Milly ^_^

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Great to see this nominated. Delicately formatted and written.

    • 5 years ago

      by Star

      Thank you so much!! :)

  • 5 years ago

    by ddavidd

    The way you assembled under and above chiminny I see that you are a rising star, ( no pun intended)
    Don't get me wrong, You did not deliver, as strong as you started, (in my humble opinion) but you are a contender, believe me I see.
    Star is right name for you, A rising one.

    • 5 years ago

      by Star

      Thank you!

  • 5 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Ooh

    Not normally a fan of short pieces but this is powerful and twisty. Much can be read into it. All probably wrong but a person can twist this to fit their particular circumstance

    Craig

    • 5 years ago

      by Star

      It seems like I did something right:) that’s a compliment thank you so much!!!

      EDIT: Thank youuu for the nomination, did not expect that all!!

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