Comments : Torn memories.

  • 5 years ago

    by D.

    Exceptionally mature poem. The last two lines are a gut punch, well done :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Shruti

    Sad and so heartbreaking, but beautifully written. Life, memories and happy moments are fleeting, and saying goodbye is the hardest part of it. I loved every word.
    Keep writing!
    ^_^