Lunarist

by Aegis   Mar 8, 2019


How many more
nights
must yield to
days

til you realize that

I

am the tilt you rest
your crooked
axis on?

5


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  • 5 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Love this, the influence of the moon, the careful placement of these words. For some reason, "tilt" just sounds so soft and delicate in this. And I liked the effect of placing "I" on its own line. Once again, you prove you can say a great deal with few words :)

    • 5 years ago

      by Aegis

      You nailed it really.. Tilt was the softest whisper of a word in the entire piece. Thank you for picking up what I was putting down^_^

  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Nice play on words in this well presented piece.

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