Comments : The Piper Must Be Paid (English sonnet)

  • 1 week ago

    by S.T.A.R.

    This one is like a sonnet from an English textbook, and I mean this as a compliment. The vocab, the form rhe style and the content, everything about it makes me want to print it and in a piece of paper, analyze it :)

  • 1 week ago

    by CJ Maleney

    DUDE!

    Been in a bit of a grump tonight but this cheered me up somewhat.

    It's rather gorgeous. Some of us like winter. You have to admit, that when she dances round the land she leaves a beautiful trail behind.

    It's kinda pure

    regards as always

    Craig

    Ps that warm snap was nice but it just didn't seem right.

    • 1 week ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Craig, you were right - I should have listened to you. Winter's not done with us yet, is she?

  • 1 week ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Ben, you had me at 'demurely'. Another work of art for us to feast our eyes and ears on.

  • 1 week ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Hey Ben, nice twist for Mother Nature's icy stinging kiss. I don't miss those cold snowy days from up North, but, remember the stunning beauty of the tree branches covered with ice, shimmering in the Sunshine, with a soft blanket of snow covering the ground.
    Nice work, added to my Favorites.

    • 1 week ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thank you so much, Ken. You are right - there is beauty in the winter, too.

  • 1 week ago

    by Brenda

    Beautifully done Ben...your sonnets are true masterpieces.

  • 1 day ago

    by Daniel

    Another outstanding sonnet, Ben. Gloriously penned as always. I find your verb use extremely extensive.